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Fancy Scratch by peperoger Fancy Scratch by peperoger
it was all Octavia´s idea.

admit it, Scratch looks adorable.


yes ATG, place a crituique here.
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Scratch in a tuxedo, bow tie, and top hat?

ALL OF MY MONEY, TAKE IT NOW!

It's very well done, although it looks a little sketchy and quick, but I have no idea as to whether you were going for that look or not, and I personally love it. It also needs a background, and you should have at least thrown Octavia's head poking in from the side of the frame, that may have been redundant though. All in all, it's impressive, amazing, and well done, and you should make more, specifically Octavia dressed like a straight thug. Keep up the good work!
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lunarapologist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Bluh, sorry it's taken a while to get to this; going to try and get through the folder today.

Anyhow! The sketchy style and lack of a background (even a simple color or gradient) give this a generally unfinished look. Also, I'm personally not a terribly huge fan of dialogue from off-screen when both parties are present in the scene. Especially so for something like this - I feel like you could get a lot of mileage out of a warmly smiling Octavia and a sheepish Vinyl interacting directly with each other (since both are things we don't get to see often).

That said, I quite like the costume - I kinda want to see it in more finished detail!
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peperoger Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
For a second there i tought the avatar was CoffeGrunts one.
And iwas thinking, "mother if god, what i did this time?"
Reading further i see not.
Hm...more detail could be better indeed. Might make this gain some other time.

Thanks!
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CorgiBurgre111 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Always love a good Scratch picture.
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BDassassin Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
yes she does
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EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like Vinyl Scratch like this considering she's my 2nd fav character behind Dash. Sorta has a steam-punk feel to it. Awesome job! :iconvinylscratchplz:
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ShadowOmegaZero Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
How dapper.
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Jaygryphon Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Hmm~ this looks steam-punky I like~
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FeralRoku Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Fancy Scratch is awesome.
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MrFahrenheit89 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Steampunk Vinyl Scratch is the Vinyl Scratch
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ArcLightKey Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job Octavia, now all you have to do is get a ri- oh wait, you dared her to get in a tuxed.... Well that ruins some sort of fantasy, of them married in case you didn't get it
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JudgementMaster Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yay?
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nyxeka Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beaUtiful*....
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drake-rex Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Way to go Octavia XD
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ODSTD56 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HUZZAH! THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
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shinebrony Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Scratch always looks beautiful :3
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mellowbloom Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As someone who absolutely adores Scratch, you have my seal of approval.
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IronBrony Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahh, cute, now Octavia can take Scratch to that fancy restaurant in Canterlot she's been wanting to go!
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TillsterRulz Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Wait, I just realized the cutie mark is facing the wrong way.
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peperoger Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
....


aw crap.

*me has to wait till night to fix, stupid old computer cant fix it.*


sorry @_@
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TillsterRulz Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
:D
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